Jaks, the Satanic

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Personal Info:
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Name: Jaks
Nickname: Jaks
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Pan-sexual
Species: Aquatic Alien Thing
Alignment: Chaotic Neutrual
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Appearance:
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Height: 14 inches
Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Skin, Scales and Fur
Eyes: Light Blue
Hair: Light blue?
Looks: Jaks has a big round dark blue head. He has a tiny little horn right on top, and sandwiching it are two "ears" like that of a rabbit. Where these "ears" bend, are gold rings. His eyes are light blue, but right between his round eyes is a yellow pentagram like star, which is yellow. Right below his mid-eye, he has white, which is the start of his "under-side". Jaks has a w shaped mouth, and fluffy cheeks. On his neck he wears a red bandanna, which covers almost his whole chest. He has two tiny dark blue arms which contain 3 fingers. He has two of these which go about an inch below his neck. Between where his arms are, he has a white underbelly with any yellow pentagram like star. At the bottom of his tiny round dark blue torso, he has his legs, which are dark blue and scaley. His white underbelly ends between these two legs. Behind his legs, Jaks has a long dark blue tail, with a tuft of light blue fur at the end.
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Specialties
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Strengths/skills: Magic, Satan, Being Punted, Speeding around, Trickery, and Swiming
Weaknesses/Flaws: Low defenses, can be punted easily, magic CAN run out, can be too obsessed with ritruals, low staina, and allergic to vegtables
Special Abilities: (FEEL FREE TO TELL ME IF THERE ARE TOO MANY!)
There is a magic System, each spell cost a certain amount of Magic Points to cast, if Jaks runs out of Magic Points he is doomed. He has a total of 200 magic points.)
Wave (25 MP)
-A summoning of a wave of water, usually used to push an enemy away or drown them.
Desolate (15 MP)
-Uses the pentagram like stars on his forehead and stomach to summon sharp ash like crystals to impale or poison the enemy.
Levitate (0 MP)
-He uses magic to levitate himself for 1- 10 feet high.
Whirlpool
-Water summoned in the shape of a tornado.
Teleport (10 MP per "portal", 5 MP every use)
-Two stars must be drawn on the ground in order for this to work. Jaks would enter one star, and exit the other, the star can only be drawn on the ground, an if one of the two stars is tainted or demolished, this will not work.
(Extra Information: The portals are wherever the stars are drawn. They can be drawn on anything, using anything from blood to ink, or carvings in rock or bark(They must be ON the ground though, no weird wall portals). If he does it too many times he will get tired, kind of like pressing a button. His stars can only teleport himself and small objects he is wearing or carrying, liquid can get through. These portals don't have a last time, but more if Jaks is in the area. Once he has left the premises of the portal, it will deactivate and disappear. He can only summon 5 at most, and if he does try to make anymore the oldest portal within the area will become inactive.)
Trap Room (50 MP)
-An illusion of an ocean will take lace around them, the false room will be from 10x10 to 50x50 feet. Is a special ability and if used will weaken the others spells.
Disguise (5 MP)
-Jaks can disguise and take form of a small child. This is to help him blend in with modern society and not end up being some random child's pet. He looks like a human form of himself and sometimes has his tail pop out. Once he enters this form it takes 5 magic points, and he will not have to use anymore, but once he wishes to leave it'll be another 5.
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Personality:
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Personality: Jaks tends to prefer to be more positive, and happy go lucky when he is around others. He usually waits a few months before inviting any new friends to his "parties". He tends to be a social butterfly, and loves begin around people. He usually stays away from hunters, poachers, and bounty hunters since he thinks that they all pose a threat. Jaks tends to be more open minded and loves to hear what other people say, unless they're stupid in his opinion. He tends to be nice to everybody, despite whether he likes them or not.
Likes: Swimming, Sacrificial Ceremonies, Being with others, Pranks, Star Gazing, and Contemplating the meaning of life
Dislikes: Desserts, Hot and dry places, being extremely bored, loneliness, and "stupid people"
Fears: Pain, loss of loved ones, not being strong enough, and fire
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Family:
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Parents: N/A
Mate: N/A
Offspring: N/A
Relative: N/A
Brothers/sisters: N/A
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History: Just your ordinary every day alien, who loves satanic practices.
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RP paragraph: F.U.R. is back in town.

Heya Jaks! I just wanted to ask for some clarification.

You say that;

Jaks wrote:Teleport (10 MP per "portal", 5 MP every use)
-Two stars must be drawn on the ground in order for this to work. Jaks would enter one star, and exit the other, the star can only be drawn on the ground, an if one of the two stars is tainted or demolished, this will not work.

I just would like to ask what these stars are? As I cannot find them in your app, so it's a little hard to know what they do. Can you just describe them to me and now much MP they use as well as how they actually are formed?

And (just because I honestly would like to know) how easy is it for him to teleport and can his stars teleport other people? How long does the portal last for...?

Bump when you have just explained these please :) <3

The stars are wherever they are drawn? They can be drawn on anything, using anything from blood to ink, or carvings in rock or bark(They must be ON the ground though, no weird wall portals). For MP I am confident I said 10 for each one drawn, and 5 MP per usage, so if he went from one portal into another, it would cost 5 MP. As for how hard it is, it's not a tremendous feat, but if he does it too many times he will get tired, kind of like pressing a button. His stars can only teleport himself and small objects he is wearing or carrying, liquid can get through. These portals don't have a last time, but more if Jaks is in the area. Once he has left the premises of the portal, it will deactivate and disappear.

So he can have like 40 open at once in the same area? O.o I think that is too many, perhaps limit how many he can have at once.

! would say the maximum in one area should be 10 tops.

How large would the area be that you are talking about for the portals? As I don't think it would be fair being able to just dodge every attack through portals that lead to one another XD if you were ever in combat RP that is.

The circumference would be like 10 inches O3O
So that means the radius would be 5 inches.
On an averaged battle field, estimating it is about 50 feet by 30 feet, that means if he made 10 portals, it would cover about 65.5 out of the total 1,500 feet large battlefield.
Does that seem like a good visual?

I'm not fussed with how much room that they take up. I'm more worried that if you have 10 portals active, that's a lot of portals which only he can go through to literally dodge anything and everything. Maybe drop it down to 5 or so which he can maintain, and perhaps anything more than 5, they become unstable or something like that? Especially considering they use tiny amounts of energy XD

I has two solutions! Keep the low costing energy for the portals and have about 7-8 or so, absolute max, or maybe increase the energy cost for them and keep 10?

I can drop it down to 5 easily. I thought you were concerned the he was going to throw boulders or something in them.

Sure!! Just pop that into your app and I'll approve it :)

Alrighty then, I will bump once done.

BUMP! I added EVERYTHING into a little mini-section under the original description called "extra information" if that's ok.

Yup! It looks good! Approved!!

I would like to add one ability please.
Disguise: Jaks can disguise and take form of a small child. This is to help him blend in with modern society and not end up being some random child's pet. He looks like a human form of himself and sometimes has his tail pop out.

Approved!