Guryon Darck

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Personal Info:
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Name: Guryon Darck
Nickname: Little Man
Age: Soul is as old as time, but current body is 22
Gender:male
Sexuality: straight
Species: Modified Drow
Alignment: Chaotic Good
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Appearance:
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Height: 12 feet
Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Pure white leathery skin.
Eyes: Black
Hair: Short spiked black
Looks: His black hair is short with side swept spikes, his hair shaved off on the side and back. His eyes a deep and bottomless, hypnotizing black. No iris, just black. His skin is blindingly white, although his body is rippling with muscles, He is oddly lanky. His feet and hands are huge. He has no facial or body hair at all. Not even eyebrows. His nose is long and thin, with small nostrils. His teeth yellow and sharp as hell. An extremely amazing jawline. His ears a small and slightly pointed. He wears no shirt, but wears baggy jeans with no shoes. His nails and sharp and pointed.
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Specialties
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Strengths/skills: He is exceptionally (physically)strong(able to lift at least 225 lbs), and a good hunter and trapper.
Weaknesses/Flaws:

• He is very naive.
  
• He can't control his emotions and thoughts.
  
• He is exceptionally weak to lightning and metal.
  
• He can't see through major magic or expert mages magic.
  

Special Abilities: He is resistant to small zaps of magic.
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Personality:
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Personality: Guryon is not very trusting. He get scared easily and when he gets scared his lashes out. When he does have trust in something he get very protective of that something. He has a IQ of 120 but doesnt process his surroundings much. He almost always takes the path of least ease for himself and lets others take the path with most ease.

Likes/Hobbies:

• A comfy spot to rest.
  
• Friends
  
• Hunting
  
• Surviving
  

Dislikes:

• Harm to his friends.
  
• Evil
  
• Heat
  
• Armor
  

Fears: He fears lightning, dragons, and demons.
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Family:
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Parents: He was created from a draw fetus. So yeah I guess he has unknown parents. I also guess you could call the scientists that created him his parents.
Mate: Maybe
Offspring: Not yet.
Relative: None known
Brothers/sisters: The other scientists creations could be considered his siblings.
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History: He was taken from his parents as a fetus and experimented on and changed. His anatomy was changed. All his colors were changed. He was was educated, and trained by the scientists and had learned everything the scientists could teach him by the age of nine. He then broke out and somehow survived in this world for thirteen years.
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RP paragraph: Its me! :D

Bumpity

Heya Guryon!

You say that your character is strong against minor magic, "He is resistant to minor magic like a fireball, or a illusion."

However, fireballs and illusions are quite powerful magic types, and your ability is also a bit too much of a broad scope. Maybe reduce the things that he is resistant to? Like small zaps of magic, or things like that.

Also, maybe put down how strong your character is, as 'strong' can be taken a lot of different ways. What's the best thing that he can do? What makes him strong?

I hope that this helps, please bump when you have edited it!

Bumped.

Approved!